WALT describe using our senses
Nurses helping the soldiers when they are
Hurt and people getting shot from other
Soldiers guns and bombs.
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Bombs zooming through the sky like an jet
And bullets Zooming 1 mile per hour and
People Calling for there Men.
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The grass when i fall and the horrible food
We have to eat and the smoke bombs that
The Other countries have dropped on the
ground.
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The wet muddy grass on people's uniform
And the rats in the trenches and the
Rotten food that the soldiers have not
Ate because it was no good.
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The rain dripping from the grey sky
And people shot me instead of others.
Feel my gun shaking .
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Terrified
Scared
Horrified
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I thought i died
But this is
No man land.
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It was easy to pretend to be a soldiers because we watched a lot of videos about the war.
You have entered lots of good detail about the situations the soldiers must have found themselves in Conrad. Well done. Remember to check 'i' as a capital letter. I think it must have been terrible to have been in.
ReplyDeleteHi Ms Sands
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog I really appreciate that
and I will try and use capital letters in my blog some other time.