Literacy Tumble

Literacy Tumble

 Hi guys, today I am going to blog about our Literacy Tumble.If you don't know what a Literacy Tumble is, well it is when you have your groups that you have to go to at different time and you have  do a slideshow that has five must do's, three should do's and three could do's. You have to get all of the must do's finished by Friday and you could do the could do's and should do's. My favourite part off the literacy tumble is commenting on someone else's blog or another class blog and doing my reading follow up.   Here is my Literacy tumble slideshow for this week but I'm not quite finished yet so here is what I have done.Please comment on my post and comment what I can improve so that I can do that next time.See Ya Latter Bloggers!

Improving Comment

Improving Comment

Hey blogger, today I'm going to do a post about what I did in cybersmart today.First we had to find a partner and open there blog to do a comment, my partner was my friend, Sebastian.

 After we open up our partners blog our teacher (Miss Paterson) said to comment on the latest blog post, so Sebastian's latest blog post was going to the Auckland Zoo and he also had a video.After I read his blog post(and Watched the video), I typed my comment and showed my teacher and said to me to go change some mistakes and then I could publish my comment.Then When we were all finished we did a google drawing that said to improve your comment and to see what we didn't do that we could do.Please comment on my work (the will be really helpful) and keep on checking out my blog. Blog you latter!!! 

This is Sebastian's blog Post.