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Wednesday, March 14, 2018

Show not tell, setting writing
This week we are working on using descriptive language by sharing our writing straight onto our blog.  The challenge we have is to describe a place using only six sentences.  After reading the description you need to guess the place that has been described. It would really help if you say what clues helped you come to this conclusion.

1.Lots of fun is here

2.kids come every day
3.people jumping everywhere
4.It is very poplaur
5.People have celebrate there 
6.lots of food and drinks

Leave a comment below thinking where you think I could be and what clues you have for this.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Conrad I really like your post it gave me a lot of info. I think I know what place your describing is it jump?.Anyway bye. Check out my blog at : http://pcsabbym.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Hi Abigail thank you for the reading and commenting on my work.You got the right place I Was describing.what cool stuff do you do in your class?
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